Sunday, November 15, 2015

Reflection on Project Three Draft

I reviewed Hallye and Swati's rough drafts.
I am only aware of one person who reviewed my paper. That person was Lawrence Wolf. I felt that his intuition and insight into my essay was very helpful. I am taking the advice and notions he made to heart. I feel that the most needed work is on my centered purpose of my essay. it is all over the place as i have noticed. I am feeling good with the overall direction of my essay so far with all the help that I have received thus far.

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  1. Just fyi: couldn't access the peer review sheets to give credit.

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