Reflection on Project Draft 1

During revisions, I looked over Hallye's paper and Bri's.

Audience:
- Who, specifically, is going to read this essay? Who am i trying to reach with my argument?
My QRG is meant for the economically interested population worldwide. In this piece, I am relaying information that could affect the economy in a major way. It is through this that I am trying to reach active investors to help out with the public shares.
-What are their values and expectations?
These people value the sustainment of the global economy and the upkeep of their personal take in the market.
- How much information do I need to give my audience?
For my audience,  I am providing all essential information for the understanding of the situation. Should they like to go more in depth, I as well have provided links to bigger articles that go into more detail for the curious reader.
- What kind of language is suitable for this audience?
In this type of context, it is important to use a more formal syntax for the reader.
- What tone should I use with my audience? Do I consistently use this tone?
The tone that I used is a more calm and informative tone. It is important to keep a QRG unbiased and informative so that people are able to form their own opinion.

Context:
-What are formatting requirements of the assignment? Do i meet them?
The requirements are to keep it short and concise and straight to the point. My format follows tis religiously in my own personal opinion.
- What are the content requirements for the assignment?
The requirements are to give a brief overview of a certain issue/controversy. I focus my entire piece on it and how its affecting Toshiba as a whole.
-Does my draft reflect knowledge or skills gained in class to my own ideas and voice?
In my own personal opinion, I do believe I used knowledge learned in class to help myself further this draft to its current standing.
-Have I addressed any grammatical issues that my teacher highlighted in class or in my previously-graded assignments?
I have not had any grammatical errors pointed out from my professor yet. However, a fellow student did point some out and then I did address those issues.

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