Revised Conclusion

Below I will be rewriting my conclusion for my rhetorical analysis.

OLD

GOP politicians who were once higher up businessmen, like David Perdue, are often quoted saying that they have at one point and time outsourced jobs to other countries. Journalist Samantha Lachman does her best to discredit Perdue simply by showing his true feelings towards the American job market. Many Americans, Lachman included, are completely against outsourcing and are just beginning to see how certain politicians do not truly have their backs like they had led us to believe.

NEW

One year later and the issue of outsourcing and its support from GOP politicians is still apparent. Samantha Lachman's rhetoric in he article about David Perdue has drawn alot attention as many Americans have begun taking issues such as this one more seriously. It is only a matter of time until purposeful outsourcing ends and politicians like Perdue do not see this as something be proud of anymore.