Thursday, October 15, 2015

Revised Introduction

In this post, I will be writing a completely new introduction paragraph.

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Some politicians claim to support the return of jobs, whereas other politicians who were former businessmen state that they are proud of outsourcing jobs. Politician David Perdue has been quoted saying that he supports and is proud of his past experiences in outsourcing jobs. It is hard to imagine being proud of an act that has affected many Americans lives. As well, it is hard to imagine in what context outsourcing could be positive, and how a person could think the general public and mainstream media would be happy with these acts. In the article “David Perdue says He’s Proud of His Background Outsourcing Jobs” from the Huffington Post, journalist Samantha Lachman reflects on how the statements made by Perdue could negatively affect his election versus Michelle Nunn.

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In the international and domestic job market, jobs constantly flow in and out of countries. In the last decade alone, jobs have started leaving the United States, yet not returning. Politicians, many of which actually support outsourcing,  have come out and said that they support the loss of the jobs and are proud of their own experiences with it. Specifically, Senator and former businessman David Perdue has been quoted in his most recent election proclaiming his pro-outsourcing stance. In the article “David Perdue says He’s Proud of His Background Outsourcing Jobs” from the Huffington Post, journalist Samantha Lachman analyzes his words and his stance on outsourcing jobs. 

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